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Violet's in Bloom, a romance novel by Glory Lennon

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Inspired by Helium’s serialization of Beyond the Blue and the Gray Tony Verna’s wonderful novel set against the backdrop of the American Civil War, I have decided to try my hand at serialization with my own story, a romance entitled Violet's in Bloom. No, this will not be a historical romance. Violet’s in Bloom is set in modern times in a fictitious small town by the name of Catalpa Valley in upstate New York.

Presented chapter by chapter Violet’s in Bloom centers around three people, one desperate for a future complete with love and family, the other just as desperate to hold onto the past and the ghost who unwittingly stands in their way.

So, are you ready for Violet’s in Bloom? Well, you wouldn’t be here otherwise.

Installment #18 of Violet’s in Bloom


photo by redeye^

Recap of last week’s episode :  

Victor tells Violet the bad news. She needs a new car. Not trusting this virtual stranger she consults her brother who unfortunately agrees with Victor.

Chapter 17: Differing Opinions

"There, now, this isn’t so bad, is it, Richard?" Heidi declared brightly, with a reassuring tap on his knee.

They were floating above the table looking down on Victor and Violet who were just finishing breakfast. The look on Richard’s face told a very different tale. He couldn’t believe this actually happened. He had been on a double date with his own wife and his "date" was Victor’s bossy yet sweet ghost mother. And now Violet was making this lawyer dude breakfast. What the hell!

With his jaw clenched tightly, he glared at Victor wishing he would choke on the waffle. To make matters worse Heidi, his new constant companion, seemed to have latched onto him like a tapeworm since the illuminating meeting at the supermarket and she hadn’t left his side for a minute. Well, that wasn’t exactly true. She had left with Victor when he finally took Violet home after the date-that-wasn’t-a-date.

Richard had finally breathed a sigh of relief then but much to his utter annoyance Heidi had been abominably right. Violet couldn’t or wouldn’t hear him anymore. Heidi told him she only would if she truly wanted to and it became painfully obvious Violet had not wanted to hear anything Richard had to say, not last night and not even this morning.

Richard got a twisting feeling in his gut thinking about it. Would she ever hear him again? He had tried everything, whispering in her ear, yelling in her face and just talking normal but nothing worked. She didn’t even blink. He had followed Violet from the moment she came home and got nowhere fast.

In the living room the cat much to his annoyance sat up looking regal instead of disdainful and reproachful. But that didn’t stop Richard from whispering in Violet’s ear, "Ginger fluff is mad at you. You shouldn’t have left her all alone." But all she did was smile and coo at the cat.

"How are you tonight, Calendula? Sorry it took me so long to get home to you. I kind of got sidetracked by a very pushy man," Violet said, scratching the spot behind the cat’s ears. "But then I’m used to forceful men, aren’t I? Richard was like that, too."

"I’m not as pushy as that guy! I never was,"he shouted angrily.

She didn’t even budge. She just sat absently stroking the purring feline with a tiny smile on her face. What was she so happy about anyway? He droned on saying anything he could think of to get some reaction out of her but nothing, just nothing! Losing his head completely he went to embrace her but she stood up abruptly and walked right through him leaving him behind as she shivered violently and walked briskly to the kitchen.

"Oh, just got a chill!" she shrieked hugging herself. "I need hot tea."

Richard stayed beside her the whole time even after she went to fill the tub with hot water and bubbles enough to float her to the sky. He was never one to talk much but he continued with his soliloquy getting more and more desperate for Violet to acknowledge him. Still nothing. She soaked in the tub for almost an hour never hearing any of his relentless chatter. All she did was hum to herself and, he suspected jealously, probably thinking of Victor Romanoff.

He came abruptly back to the present when Victor took Violet’s chin in hand and tilted her face up to his as if to kiss her. Richard was at their side in an instant but so was Heidi. With a placating hand on his arm and her ever-present sweet smile she told him without words there truly was nothing to worry about and sure enough she was right. Victor was just telling Violet what Richard had always said. Namely that she didn’t need makeup. Harmless enough, sure but still...he just didn’t like this slick city dude so close to his Violet.

"Now, don’t be like that, Dear. They’re just getting acquainted," Heidi said with a condescending pat on his cheek.

Richard had to bite back a scathing retort lest he show his true feelings on the matter. They obviously had very different opinions about all this. Heidi, however, didn’t actually need to hear him speak to know what ran through his mind was not the same as her own thoughts on this budding new friendship between her son and Richard’s widow. She would try to fix that if not for her Victor’s sake then for Violet’s.

"They seemed to have a nice time last night at the Mount Claire and now here, too. Violet does enjoy cooking, doesn’t she? Rather a bit like me," she said with a girlish giggle. "We both like to spoil our family and friends, don’t we?"

Richard made a slight growling sound at the back of his throat but loud enough for her to hear quite plainly. "You do want Violet to enjoy life, don’t you, Richard?"she asked pointedly, her dark eyes so much like her son’s boring into Richard’s bright blue ones.

He grimaced as a squirming, guilty feeling hit him. He couldn’t look into those eyes. It made the feeling intensify. It was indeed one of the many things Violet loved to do, cooking and baking. And she didn’t get to do much of it anymore now that she was alone.

"Of course I do," he said rather reluctantly.

"Then you aren’t going to begrudge her a friend for whom she can cook and who in return can take her out to dinner, a walk in the park or the occasional movie. You know, a friend with whom she can enjoy life, right?" she continued remorselessly.

He thought he might break his back teeth from grinding them together so hard. Of course he wanted her to enjoy life. What kind of beast would he be if he didn’t? But Violet hadn’t been cooking at the restaurant, he thought grumpily, and as for them going for a walk in the park or out to a movie? Well, wouldn’t that fall under "dating"? And weren’t they not supposed to be dating?

He hated watching them laugh and talk and laugh some more all night and now at breakfast, too. Violet had made Victor laugh several times but she made everyone laugh. That was to be expected, the way she was but she also held Victor’s hand. She actually held his hand! That wasn’t supposed to be a date? Sure as hell looked like it from where he sat floating above their table the entire night.

"She likes to talk about you, Richard, and Victor is so willing to hear it. That should make you feel better," Heidi added eying him carefully. When he said nothing she continued. "I imagine it’s been quite a while since she’s been out or even talked to anyone about you?" Though she said this tentatively there was a shrewd expression in her eyes that gave Richard the impression she already knew the answer to that.

"Our anniversary," he muttered. "And she only ever talks to her best friend Jocelyn about me."

Heidi’s smile faded. "Oh, the poor dear! Jocelyn being away and all, she has no other outlet, does she? So good of Victor, don’t you think, Richard? He allowing her to reminisce about you is good for her. Seems to make her brighten and come alive. Oh, but it is wonderful that Violet can remember and talk about her last date with you with such fondness. She’ll carry that memory forever. It’s what I would do. She does love you so, Richard," she said softly, her eyes aglow now.

Richard felt a constriction in his throat that prevented speech. He hated to admit it even to himself but Heidi was perfectly correct. Violet should enjoy life. He just wished Victor wasn’t the one making her laugh or bringing that lively sparkle to her lovely eyes. He also would love it if this slick lawyer dude would stop looking at his wife as if she were a priceless painting and treating her like a princess. That was his job after all. Or it had been, blast it!

Richard was convinced all wasn’t as it appeared. He knew Victor’s game. He had seen this ploy enough times with his own friends and acquaintances of dubious character. Victor was just playing nice, pretending to be a sweet guy to gain a naive girl’s confidence, and there was no denying Violet was indeed gullible, naive girl. She’ll let her guard down and then wham! Victor would move in for the kill and Violet would be.....No! He couldn’t let that happen, not to his precious Violet.

It made no sense though. She was always so discerning, always more than cautious with men but here she was trusting this virtual stranger as if she’d known him all her life. He could see it so clearly so why couldn’t she?

Again Heidi seemed to know what he was thinking almost before he did.

"I raised my son right, Richard. Victor has no ill will in his heart and would never press his advantage least of all on a person he so respects, admires and nearly worships. You need not worry about Violet’s virtue or safety. He would sooner die than cause her harm. Believe me this. I know my son," she said with such fierce finality he had to trust her.

But trust can only take you so far and Richard just would never trust Victor alone with his wife.

Both he and Heidi followed them to the daycare center, she beaming, he glowering. Victor and Violet’s easy banter was simply music to Heidi’s ears while Richard heard only discordant notes of a hated song. First dinner, then breakfast and now Victor was taking Violet to work as if they did this everyday. Would it become an everyday thing seeing them together like this, Richard wondered miserably? Had he really lost Violet forever?

Chapter 18:  Ride into Treadwell

Violet is amazed to discover Victor’s love of kids, all kids not just his own, is equal to her own. She’s also unaccountably annoyed to find him easy to talk to, easy to be with and charming beyond reason. We should all have such problems!

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Comments (1 to 10 of 21)

Glory Lennon
Jan 13, 10 at 05:31 PM
T'was the chocolate cake, wasn't it? Thanks Judy.
Judith C Evans
Jan 10, 10 at 08:03 PM
Wow, Glory, I'm continuing to enjoy every installment! Can't wait to find out what happens between Violet and Victor. Your descriptions of their meal made me hungry, too! This is awesome...I'll say it again: this is awesome!!!
Glory Lennon
Dec 03, 09 at 01:38 PM
Hello, J. Gregory, Catalpa Valley is modeled after my own little Greentown, PA where I currently reside and yes, that picture looks very much like I "see" Catalpa Valley in my mind. Thanks for visiting the zone and Catalpa Valley!
J Gregory Evans
Dec 03, 09 at 04:28 AM
Hi Glory. I am quite new to your novel but am going through slowly to grasp all the dialogue and imagery. One thing on your zone that really stood out for me was Catalapa Valley. Nice place it seems for a small town. Was the photo representative of that location? Please keep up such a nice zone.
Glory Lennon
Nov 09, 09 at 03:31 AM
Thank you, Olivia and Judy. I do appreciate your nice words. To those you haven't yet stumbled across Judy's own novel-in-progress The Explorer, I recommend you check it out and get lost in another adventure. It's way cool!
Judith C Evans
Nov 03, 09 at 09:25 PM
I love this Zone! Thanks for sharing this story; I look forward to reading more.
Olivia Bredbenner
Oct 31, 09 at 05:13 PM
Glory...you are one fantastic writer ..You go girl !! :) Olivia
Jim Bessey
Oct 26, 09 at 07:55 PM
Finally took the time to read #4, chapter 3, Glory. Smiled from start to finish and totally enjoyed it. On to the one you have posted right here. Enjoy your vacation.
Glory Lennon
Oct 09, 09 at 01:09 PM
Of course not, Jim. You must know it is the ghost's choice who he will haunt. You obviously are not haunt worthy!
Jim Bessey
Oct 08, 09 at 09:54 PM
Loved installment 3, too, Glory. You've done a wonderful job painting this complicated family scene. Great dialogue! Can I have a ghost of my own?

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Violet's in Bloom

 

Cast of Characters:

Richard Bennett: Fire fighter who dies and comes back as a ghost . He is earthbound because  he doesn't want to leave his wife.

Violet Bennett: Richard's loving widow. Vows to never love another.

Freddy Norton:  Violet’s brother and Richard’s best friend.

Laurie Norton: A talented artist and Freddy’s less-than-perfect but lovable wife.

 Valerie Norton: The Norton’s eldest child, fourteen years old.

Molly Norton: The Norton’s youngest child, age five.

Jimmy Norton: The Norton’s nine year old son.

Nicky Norton: The Norton’s twelve year old son.

Jocelyn Lefleur: A formidable, outspoken, black woman, best friend of Violet and owner of the Mio Caro Bambino Daycare Center.

Missy Cambry: 5 month old baby at the daycare center.

Karen Struthers: Missy’s teenaged mother.

Diane Murphy: Young, single mother who Violet hires to manage the daycare center.

Heather Murphy: Diane’s precious four year old daughter.

Victor Romanoff : Divorced criminal lawyer secretly in love with Violet, good friends with Freddy.

 Mac Smithers:  Best darn fly fisherman in Catalpa Valley (and he’ll tell you that too) now retired and volunteering at the daycare center.

Glady Smithers:  Mac’s wife also volunteering at Mio Caro Bambino teaching needle crafts.

Heidi Romanoff: Victor’s mother who died some years back and has been "guiding" Victor to his happiness.

Helen Gibson: Violet’s friend and co-worker.

Winnie Drexel:  Violet’s friend and co-worker.

Cheryl Fina:  Violet’s friend and co-worker.

Pamela Moyer: Violet’s friend and co-worker.

What you need to know about Catalpa Valley


photo by Lucid Nightmare

This picturesque yet tiny town has one major road predictably named Main Street and you no sooner find yourself on it than you will be off it again. Main Street, approximately two miles in length, is where you will find all that a small town can offer; the town’s only post office, drug store, Wally's supermarket, hardware store, farm supply shop, library, daycare center, Larry’s car care, the Ruffian Bar and Grille, the school complex, the park, the fire station, the church, Mandy’s garden center/florist shop, Tony’s Italian restaurant, Norton Financial Services, the ice cream shop, Jaime’s Deli and a recent addition, the Law Offices of Victor Romanoff.

Off Main Street there are many lesser roads, some still not paved, many with houses, vacation homes and hunting cabins in varying degrees of shabbiness. Some have neat little gardens while others are overrun with weeds and Virginia Creeper vines. Some are surrounded by thick stands of trees while others sit in the middle of large meadows, next to wide hay fields or,  like the Mount Claire Restaurant, sitting peacefully beside the large glacial Lake Cramer.

Catalpa Valley is approximately a three and a half hour’s drive from New York City, roughly two hundred miles northwest. The closest thing to a "real" town around is Oneonta, about 30 miles north of Catalpa Valley. What would classify it as a real town? Well, Oneonta has a K-mart, a Home Depot and a McDonald’s. That is civilization indeed!

Other so-called civilized towns in the area are Davenport where the Mason Mental Institution can be found, East Meredith, considered to be the hub of culture featuring the Beaumont Art Gallery and the closest thing to Broadway, the Sullum Playhouse, Treadwell, where Heller’s Car Dealership can be found and Meridale home of the Weston Botanical Garden . Why are you being told all this? You’ll see soon enough.

Future Installments

Every week, barring major catastrophes, a new chapter of Violet's in Bloom will be published on whichever day I feel like posting it. I'll try for Saturday but don't count on it. It's not like I don't have other things to do, you know, like my other Novellas and the Adventures of Zebrina the Cat both of which take up loads of time. But suffice it to say it will be at least once a week but at times I may be able to post more frequently depending on many factors.

Occasionally a new chapter may appear only in the Table of Contents so check there first for links to future chapters.

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From Violet's Kitchen

Everybody in Catalpa Valley will tell you, Violet Bennett is the best cook around. Even with her arsenal of recipes which she freely gives out to friend and foe alike no one has yet to take her title though many have tried. Here is your chance to try her recipes and see if you won't earn yourself the reputation of the best cook in your neck-of-the-wood.

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